Whats the problem?
People are suicidal over this? In my opinion its not half bad. The voices sounded fine the me. The drawings were, compared to some other animations, great. The animation itself could use work in some places, but its not all bad. I personnaly didnt think the humor was that bad either. I got a chuckle out of the cheeto on the map part.
Its no perfect 10, but they cant all be. Nice work Hoim.